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Blood
By Ashraf Hamed Jr
8/26/09

He saw her by the corner of his eyes.  
She was walking home from the store in the middle of the night

He walked behind her
Slowly
Every Strut
Your heart beating
Faster
Faster
Her blood bubbling in her chest
His eyes piercing like a sword
He mimicked every step one at a time
Until she stopped
He was gone
Was he in her imagination?
She turns to find him in front of her.

Beauty
Fangs
Muscled
Staring back at her
She gulped

He smiled and he walked slowly to her

My dear he whispers
Do you need help
I can escort you through the night, as a guide

She turned away to find him in front of her again
He grabbed her pushing into her soft but delicate skin
She went to scream but he started kissing her
Nibbling on her lip
She tasted him
She tasted her blood
She felt in complete ecstasy.
She kissed back
Their tongues a brushing around each other
She pushed him away, but he pulled her close.
She dropped her groceries
He stopped kissing her, and kissed her neck
He whispers “Say it”
She whispers “Please do”
He bites her
Her blood slowly streaming down her neck

She couldn’t utter nothing more but a “Yes”
“Harder”
“Feed off my blood” she whispered.
She feels nothing no more
She smells nothing no more
She just see’s him

And the pool of blood she’s in.
She starts laughing, and he smiles and says
“Glad you had a great time.  I’ll hit you up later, sugar”

He fades away from eye site
She is found in a pool of her blood a minute later
She is brought to intensive care, where she is kept for 3 days

She awakens, and a officer comes in.
He shuts the curtain, and asks her, what happened
As she began to talk, he turns around
It’s the man again.  
Before she could say anything, he was kissing her
Blood dripping down her chin
She was his slave
His lover
His sustenance


T The End T
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Author's Comments

This was a request of Deserfire: [link]

That was the original art. I hope she likes it. It's kind of erotic. It gives me goosebumps lol

I hope you enjoy it
Please read more of my work

~Ash

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:icondesertfire:
............

Give me a second....

*walks behind a wall, you hear sounds that sound supciously like squealing and jumping up and down*

Ahem *walks out from behind wall composed* This is AWESOME!!! :glomp: I'm a romance fan so this is beautiful! I saw the entire movie in my head as I was reading this. You have made me fall more in love with my elf vampire biker dude....

Thank you so much!! :glomp: I shall link this poem to my artwork, unless that bothers in in which case tell me and I won't.

Anyway, I'll shut up now. Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! :excited:

Ahem....I'm calm.....:squeal:

--
I must try to keep my focus, and I know.
I must try to keep my head together.
I might not be there when you need me but.
I must try to keep my head down.

Supernatural Winchester's Caramelldansen: [link]
:iconorochimaru2072:
i would be honored if you link it. I am just glad you liked it :D I was so worried *blush* I am super happy now :D thanks <3
~Ash

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Please look at my work. Black Widow Butterfly, Alice and Me, Overdose, Hello Daddy, If Only She Knew, and more :D
:icondesertfire:
Awesome!! Yep! :nod: Glad to know it makes you happy! You are welcome!

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I must try to keep my focus, and I know.
I must try to keep my head together.
I might not be there when you need me but.
I must try to keep my head down.

Supernatural Winchester's Caramelldansen: [link]

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